I don’t think I did that well in my paper. Some parts could have been explained in more detail or written more smoothly. At times, I relied heavily on information from studies and could have added more of my own analysis and voice. I also think some paragraphs were repetitive and could have been organized better to improve the flow of the paper. Overall, even though there are areas I could improve, I am proud of the amount of research and effort I put into this project.


